Quotes
and dark, I feel like no other colors exist.
My mum used to give me blank journals when I was younger to help me “sort things through” she’d say. “Put it on paper if you can’t talk, and get it out of your head so it doesn’t fester.” That was how she’d found out about the drugs when I was sixteen. Getting me to write everything down was a smart move on her part.
My mum used to give me blank journals when I was younger to help me “sort things through” she’d say. “Put it on paper if you can’t talk, and get it out of your head so it doesn’t fester.” That was how she’d found out about the drugs when I was sixteen. Getting me to write everything down was a smart move on her part.
Sequence and Timeline
Swap entries 1 and two
Any history, sentiment, and/or attachment of the journal should come first.
Issues:
▪︎ It doesn't flow
▪︎ It doesn't make sense to start documenting right away in the first entry only to reverse back and explain the journals origin .
▪︎ The wording in entry 1 is choppy making for a bursque tone.
▪︎ Firsr entries carry the heaviest of weight, to be respected, see ▪︎3
▪︎ Journal given when sees his mom, entry 1 seems to be upon his arrival in England before that.
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