John, or at least he thinks that's his name, pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="is lost" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-hint="Passive verbs make your writing less direct. Try to use an active verb instead." data-pwa-id="pwa-B91335716BE7518A66E5C1B61D8C6DFB" data-pwa-rule-id="PASSIVE_VOICE" data-pwa-suggestions="">is lost and surrounded by mountains. The only way to find a path out is up, but when he pwa-mark pwa-mark-done" data-pwa-category="style" data-pwa-dictionary-word="starts to see" data-pwa-heavy="false" data-pwa-hint="Readability may be enhanced by using: sees" data-pwa-id="pwa-C8FB5E6037E5E0D3BAAA8A0590A9D597" data-pwa-rule-id="READABILITY_931" data-pwa-suggestions="sees">starts to see body parts sticking out of the ground, he gets worried.
